Thursday, May 30, 2013

Week 3: Journal Writing - Module 1



Observe a scene, preferably in a crowded, busy, or public place. List the activities that you see occurring and the actors (those doing the activity). Write 5-6 sentences that use your observation list and underline the subjects of your sentences. Write a few sentences experimenting with using different types of pronouns from the tables in Unit 3.



Activities/Actors list

Reading - Young woman
Talking - Three friends
Working - Dark-haired guy, short girl with frizzy hair
Waiting - Well-dressed man
Texting - Elderly fellow
Ordering - Soccer-mom

Sentences:

A young woman is reading a dog-eared book in the corner of the café.

Talking animatedly, the three friends whiled away the afternoon.

A dark-haired guy and a short girl with frizzy hair were working behind the counter.

I noticed the well-dressed man waiting for someone at one of the tables.

It is a modern world when you aren't surprised to see an elderly fellow texting on his iPhone.

The soccer-mom ordering coffee was obviously stressed.


Sentences with experimentation (really not the most coherent assignment description for a writing class...)

She is reading a dog-eared book in the corner of the café.

Talking animatedly, they whiled away the afternoon.

They were working behind the counter.

I noticed him waiting for someone at one of the tables.

It is a modern world when you aren't surprised to see someone texting on his iPhone.

Somebody ordering coffee was obviously stressed.



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